Safety Tips – Draft Video

When we announced our topics for this course, I had grand visions for the video component of this project. I envisioned beautiful sweeping shots of families and construction workers.  Sunrises over skyscrapers with inspirational music resulting in an emotional connection to safety. During week one, I was already writing my acceptance speech for best short safety film. However, this week I realized that I couldn’t afford Martin Scorsese to direct my film and I had to re-evaluate my plans. I decided to make a quick and simple training video on 5 safety tips to remind workers how and why to work safely.

Design Approach
I had to do some research before starting my storyboard.  What were the five safety tips I was going to share with our employees?  To figure that out, I made a list of 7-8 tips and met with our Safety Director, Steve Brennan, who you met in my audio story.  With his direction and feedback, I set to work on my storyboard.

This part of the project was really fun (who doesn’t like to draw?).  I designed my film to follow an instructional flow.  I knew I’d need a lot of title screens so I made sure to include those on my storyboard. I then drew the sequences as I imagined them in my mind.  I made sure to apply lessons learned from our readings about shot selection – so I drew different close ups and detail shots.

After taking a break, I reviewed the storyboard one more time to make sure I was on track. My second pass revealed ideas I didn’t think would work so I made further changes. At this time, I also established a base for timing.  I knew I had 3 minutes and 6-7 sections, so I divided up the time equally.

Check out my storyboard below.

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Design Execution
I began executing my design by creating a list of shots I needed.  Since the majority of my scenes take place on active construction sites, I had to plan ahead and reserve time with superintendents and project managers. I also had to pre-plan still photography I would need to incorporate. Once I secured my shoot schedule I began creating my graphics and titles based on my storyboard.

I used Adobe Photoshop and Illustrator to create my graphics and titles.  I absolutely love how integrated the Creative Suite is – revisions to my graphics were updated immediately in Premiere. I also decided to use content created previously in this course as branding elements in the film which integrated seamlessly.

Since I had all my graphics done prior to shooting any video, I chose to build a structure for my film first in Premiere. I placed them all into my timeline to create a 3-minute guide.  This approach helped me determine how much video I had to shoot.  It also provided a guide for my narrative, which I admittedly completed as my last step.

Finally it was time to film!  I shot all my video and still photographs onsite with my iPhone. Again, the storyboard was crucial to the success of my filming.  When onsite, I was able to pull this out and explain to my “cast” exactly what I was looking for.  This part of the project was really fun and allowed me to collaborate and work with individuals at my company I’m not usually exposed to.  In total, I spent a little more than 4 hours shooting video around various job-sites.

Once I had all my segments filmed and photographs taken, I got back to work in Premiere.  Since I already had my framework established (graphics and titles), I had to create 6 21-second segments for each safety tip and introduction.  I accomplished this by importing my videos and dragging them to the timeline.

Our professor made a post that touched on editing burnout – wow; that was accurate.  I estimate I spent a total of 15 hours editing this 3-minute video and still have work to do.  As I worked through each segment I seemed to get better and better with the software but I also became more and more critical. Edit, watch, edit, watch – it was a vicious cycle. The crazy thing is, I enjoyed every minute of it.

Next Steps
The next steps for this project include adding background music and redoing my voice-overs. As I mentioned before I left this until last, which was a bad idea.  Ideally I would love to get someone with a great construction voice to record these, however I’ve called in a bunch of favors already for this film.  I also intend to add transitions to my video and graphics.

Take a look at my draft video above and let me know what you think!

10 responses to “Safety Tips – Draft Video”

  1. Hello, Bill.
    I enjoyed your video clip so much. Thank you so much for the nice work.

    1. Text color of the title
    Personally, I like the text color you used. The texts in orange look very clear. But it would be better to make a little color change on the title. With the same color, format, and alignment on the title and tips, it might cause a little confusion because the clip directly proceeds to the first tip on the 28 second mark.

    2. Background music
    At the beginning, it would be better to add some short background music to make this clip more active and lively. With the 3-minute time limit, the background music should be short but a proper fade-in and fade-out effect will help to naturally combine the current video clip.

    3. The organization of the clip
    I got so much insight from your design process and storyboard. I never thought I could build up the storyboard with some pictures. The pictures must be helpful to clarify each scene.

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    1. Thanks for the feedback, Miri. I will definitely explore these ideas as I finalize my video.

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  2. Hi Bill. This was an enlightening video as I have to admit I don’t know much about the construction world. The video clips hold the viewer’s attention as they combine many different camera angles—great work incorporating the course reading about this topic. Isn’t this method a technique of Scorsese’s as well? So an award is indeed due!

    Your video clearly demonstrates a logical progression that is a direct result of your thorough storyboard mapping. A couple suggestions to consider: perhaps lengthening the pause frame on the initial title slide once all elements are present, and then pausing longer on each ‘tip’ slide. This would help the viewer fully intake the messages contained on these slides. I would also suggest slightly slowing down your narration to highlight your natural emphasis on key words.
    As a whole a very good video that contained a lot of beneficial information without being overwhelming.

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    1. Thanks, Heather – great suggestions! You’re spot on about the title durations. I think a little bit slower pace overall would help a lot.

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  3. Hi Bill! It seems you really got the hang of Premiere and the different effects you can utilize, those of which I am still trying to learn! This was a very well organized video and very easy to follow along and understand. Great job at creating a video that can later be utilized to show future and present employees why you work safely! I have to agree with Miri that maybe a little music at the beginning and at the end would add a nice touch to make a little less dry. It’s a lot of information into three minutes, so some music my help the feel of the video. The videos were great with your narration, but I almost think your voice needs to be just a little bit louder because it’s hard to concentrate on both. I think your voice should be the dominant attention grabber. Hope this helps!

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    1. Thanks, Masey. I agree that adding music will help improve the tone and feel of the video. I’m looking forward to listening to Creative Common’s best training music!

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  4. Thanks for the valuable feedback, everyone!

    I feel like I’ve watched my video a million times. I’m pleased with my draft thus far, however see some areas I’d like to focus my revisions on.
    o Overall Pace – I need to experiment with timing. Overall the video seems too fast with too much information – I’d like to slow it down and focus on the tips.
    o Introduction – I don’t think my introduction adds much value. I plan to rework that with background music instead of narrative to build excitement for the tips I share.

    Classmate feedback was outstanding, as usual.

    There was consensus in regards to adding background music. This will be one of the first revisions I complete as it will determine the tone and pace of my video moving forward. I’ll need to spend time browsing options from the creative common resources to find something that can help convey the serious, yet fun tone I’m looking for.

    Feedback focused around my titles was great. Miri shared a good suggestion about adding a color change to differentiate between titles and tips. I agree that these need to stand apart and will experiment with changes within the color scheme I’ve created.

    I really appreciate the comments focusing on my narration since I remarked in my post that I wanted to redo those. I don’t think I’m going to re-do them all, but there are parts I’d like to reevaluate and slow down to my natural pace, as Heather suggested. The parts I don’t re-record, I will experiment with in Premiere or Audition.

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  5. Hi Bill

    I have to say, very well done. Obviously you put a lot of preplanning into the format and story line. The 5 simple tips were great and easy to follow, the title graphics popping into side of video was a great effect. The separate title before each section was very effective as was the starting and ending introduction and review respectively.
    The only things I saw that would be improvements were transitions effect between video clips instead of just jumping from one to another. Maybe an opening narration over the intro graphic. A couple video clips had the guy move out of frame on top when climbing ladder or to left to get his tools to put on the cart. Maybe closing credits at the end, I would definitely want to claim credit for this work. Overall a great start that will be professional quality with just a couple alterations.

    Cheers Rob

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  6. Hi Bill,
    What a great, clean video you have made. I would love to be able to share this with our construction crew when it is finished.

    I love the use of your explanatory titles. In the end I want an acronym so I can remember 1. PPE, 2. stretch, 3. ladders, 4. pre-plan, 5. speak up. Just so I can remember it all tomorrow. But maybe that is not important since you said there were actually about three more pieces on the list.

    I also love, love, love the video of workers stretching. All of us – even at desk jobs – should be doing this every day and throughout the day. – Hey! There is the next project for you to tackle for your company.

    One thing I would adjust is the speed of the inside pan of the skyscraper. Perhaps you could slow that down.

    I don’t mind your voice on the narration. It is calm and collected, just like someone would want reading this topic.

    Thanks for producing quality projects. They have been fun to follow. I think you set the bar for the class. Thanks for the good inspiration.
    -Richelle

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    1. Thanks for the feedback and kind words, Richelle! I’ve been working with the creative suite for over a decade now so I’ve had a bit of a leg up. I’ve been equally impressed with our classmates being able to dive in and use the Adobe products with minimal training. Happy to share the final video with you to make your jobsites safer, just let me know where to send it!

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